Kia ora Peter, this is Zana from the Summer Learning Journey. Good job with your similes they are great and I like how you used different objects. Could you try to use something different than fast, like Shelly Ann is as quick as lightning or Peter is as strong as a building. Keep up the good work! Ngā mihi nui, Zana Yates
Kia ora Peter, this is Zana from the Summer Learning Journey. Good job with your similes they are great and I like how you used different objects. Could you try to use something different than fast, like Shelly Ann is as quick as lightning or Peter is as strong as a building. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteNgā mihi nui,
Zana Yates